It was constructive thank you for your input. I was still in the building the narrative phase so I did intentionally limit choices because I want a foundation for what's to come. I foresee a long life span for this story in particular so establishing the world and characters have taken the forefront as of the first three chapters which I did state on my in previous updates. But rest assure the limited choices in the beginning was on purpose for the sake of making things easier on myself and the reader to get exposition about the world and characters without making it be too overwhelming. Candidly speaking the journey in the story has just begun and most of the choices that has been given (With an exception of a few) aren't really shaping the entire narrative as much as it is telling and explaining the narrative. (as much as I loathe exposition it's needed) The prologue was to set the tone, chapter 1&2 were meant to introduce the rest of the cast and get understanding of how they fit in. But as I've said previously I feel as though chapter 2 was my last one kind of explaining the world and characters now that we've met the main characters of the story. From here on I planned on focusing more on your MC's journey and decisions. (In a writing since its my 'Derail the train' time.) Though I see your point and receive your criticism, and thank you for sharing~
That's definitely weird I play tested on both Ios and Android and the scroll bar worked for both some im not sure why its doing that for you but I will look into what I can do to change some things around ♥
First off thank you SO much for the SS! Ill be fixing them now~
but to answer your other questions your mc was upset because the blacksmith only looked at Sarosh and then hinted at their being 'Butterflies' while basically dissing everyone besides them. .'His gaze flitted momentarily to a familiar face, but the Blacksmith swiftly averted his eyes, only sparing a passing glance at Sarosh. "A couple of butterflies don't mean I'll linger amidst this wretched frog pond,"" So he essentially called everyone else frogs.
After the encounter you only get options to think about the ones who mad an impact on the scene Aiden as adorable as they are only stood behind during the encounter. ♥
Update I found the issue! it was linked to the wrong passage but I fixed it!
There should've been a pop up prompt if you have popups enabled. But also the next update will be addressing the pop ups all together and turning them into inputs instead! Which will be coming very soon within a couple weeks! Check the last update log I posted for more info!
rejecting aiden in anyway isnt going to make them hate you either way because you guys are bestie but I just think I'm a super sarcastic person with my friends so it def plays into their relationship. But ill be more mindful of it in the future
