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I enjoyed the demo and I'll be looking forward to the finished release, though I will admit the english translation is a bit clunky in places, I hope this will be improved in the final version.

Also, tiny glitch: this text box cuts off (this is for if you try to interact with Dylans Room after already witnessing the event that happens in there)

Hi, I hope you won't mind a slightly longer comment/review.

Overall I really enjoyed the game and found it a nice time, though I do have a few bits of feedback.

Pros:

• Your artstyle is very cute and I find that its simplicity fits the wholesome and yet slightly macabre vibe very well 
• The plot was interesting to follow and left a lot of potential for more to be done with the characters. 
• Speaking of the characters, you introduced a lot of them for such a short game and yet I found that none of them felt unnecessary which is very impressive (and again, a lot of potential for things to be explored like what happened between Yukina and Lemontart, or Ruepie and Lemontart [...Lemontart has a lot of beef between him and other people doesn't he], the stuff about Fukuro, Okari, and Tori's parents, in general what Ruepie's deal is or whatever is going on with Mochi, Redd and Chare since they’re only really there for one game over route etc etc) My fav character was probably Yukina :> 
• The CGs were all very nice; In particular I found the CG with Lixue during the good ending to be pretty cool.

Cons:

• I would really recommend running your dialogue through a spell check.There’s a lot of typos and small grammatical errors. Additionally, you should be putting full stops at the end of dialogue sentences, even at the end of the textbox. I don’t find this stuff particularly deal-breaking myself, but I know that people can get really bothered by it. At the very least I strongly suggest fixing the name in the download file and updating the name to be spelled correctly in the game’s description.
• I would probably suggest giving the wolf a bit of stall time at the start of the chase sequences. The first time the chase happened I died before I even got my hands on the keyboard because I was yet to even realize that I was given back control of the character much less the fact a chase sequence was happening. The way I personally viewed it is if I saw a cutscene of the characters running away and then it cuts it would cut to after the running away and not “running away part 2 now you do it”.
• This is nitpicky but the bone asset is very hard to see against the snow on both of my monitors. This is fine in the start when Noelle is making the hook, it’s like ooo gore hidden in the snow and all that I get it, but during the chase when the screen is constantly moving it gets a bit hard to see and I did get tripped up by it because I simply couldn’t see it. I’d suggest making the bones a bit more yellowed or perhaps adding some blood splatter on there so they’re easier to see.

Stil even with those small issues, overall this game was very nice and I hope you’ll continue to make more games. I’m not trying to discourage you here. I can see a lot of potential with the little world you’ve crafted here and I hope it will be used eventually.

Have a great day ^^

Edit: Wait, I forgot to ask. What's the axe used for? I got all endings and picked every choice I could, as well as tried to interact with all characters but I never figured out when it was used, if at all.

So I saw everything?

Great :D

Looking forward to any future games from you

I did

Then I went through the hallway thingy until i saw the two characters that said Welcome and after that i lost control of the ghost but idk if that was intentional or if it just broke for me or smth

Very nice little game, I enjoyed it

Spoilery(?) Question Below

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So, I'm assuming the Walt Disney Grave logs the progress and stuff you found?

What are the max values on those

most i got was 

4

3

5

Did I miss something? Cause I tried to be as thorough as possible

I got both endings!

Very fun game

The way the music was set up is v neat imo

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If you start picking up the parts does the demon just never show up or does it show up and u die?

bc i couldn't get 'em to show up when i did pick up stuff but maybe i just didn't play long enough on that attempt

Hi

I wanted to inform you that this background has been used(without credit) by a scam NFT thingy to promote their NFTs

They couldn't even trim the goddamn image so they just squished it '-'

They've stolen a lot of other art, some of which being  art for/from commercial projects, which is why I'm currently looking for the artists of those pieces so they could take appropriate action if they wish to do so

If you'd like to message that scam NFT and ask them to take down the stuff including your art, their twitter @ is @BattlesHero 

Hi

I wanted to inform you that this background has been used by a scam NFT service to promote their... well NFTs

They've taken art from other artists without permission (or credit) including stuff made exclusively for commercial project

I understand that this particular piece falls under CC0 

But I believe it's still valid me to inform what garbage your nice art is unfortunately used in

If you'd like to message that scam NFT and ask them to take down the stuff including your art, their twitter @ is @BattlesHero 

So uh 

Here it is 

I drew Pulse 

Not sure why them specifically, but cute 4th wall breaking computer is cute so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

I'm bad at angles, I apologise :/

I'll probably end up drawing some other characters but I can't make any promises 

Hello I just wanted to say this is a good game

I enjoyed it a lot, was very fun, music is nice,art is cute

overall good

I am now off to draw fanart which I hopefully will have the motivation to finish

Hello.

I just wanted to say I really like this game.

I found it by accident but it's very fun

Still haven't gotten all achievements 

Mainly cuz I'm an idiot

And so far it's been a really fun game, looking forward to any further updates.

Good job on the game and keep up the good work :>