Hi! I'm loving the story so far and cant wait for more. With the newest update where you stay with Val if you choose that you're "bullied into taking the bed." after the nightmare thing it still has you on the couch after waking up. As if you didnt fall asleep in the bed. (This maybe an error or I missed something.)
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Well the pacing seems realistic if you ask me, because you know the mc disappeared for 10 hecking years, and people are responding accordingly don't know what you're expecting while the characters are processing this. With what we're given so far with the end of chapter 3 is when stuff is gonna start to kick off. Also in the nicest of ways I chuckled at the "MC is clearly meant to be female because they worked at their moms cafe at a point in time and is stunned at missing 10 years of existence and require help."