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Okay review time! I thought the overall concept to be reasonably well done. The dialogue between characters was quite nice. The main issues were around some of the tone and pacing of the mall section in relation to the other parts of the game as the mall has a consistent pace that is different from the rest. I found the art to complement the story and works well with the overall content. I'll give this a 3/5 (OK/average).

Okay review time! This is a short and sweet vignette about some pretty heavy mental stuff going on with out MC. I liked the narration in how it clearly communicated this without being unreasonably direct. I found the theme somewhat difficult to parse (I might've just missed it) due to the nature of the vignette. The combination of visuals with the topic was also very clever. Overall, it is unique and evocative, so I'll give it a 4/5 (good).

Okay, review time! I would say that the overall experience of playing this VN was quite nice as the issues that are present are neither obtrusive nor distracting. I enjoyed the use of CGs & the way that they were each unique for the scene they were a part of. The main issues I had were around the writing, namely the occasional grammatical error and phrasing. However these were not severe. I also though that the music chosen was a good touch. The VN had some issues but was well constructed regardless, so I'll give it a 3/5 (OK/average).

Took some time to get the libraries on my computer to cooperate with me to compile it, but now it's done. Also sorry I was being forgetful about the rules of alternate versions. So no need to worry!