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Great Shield power-up and works on phones! very nice job!

Love how you're dodging different planets, very good!

Amazing! Great animations, music and artstyle! truly a fantastic work!

Nice music and a great celebration screen for getting highscore!

Fantastic presentation! Music & Sound were phenomenal! 

Very, VERY addictive! Wild West Style is cool!

PROS:

+Great Visuals

+Nice writing

+Relaxing music

+Very Wholesome

CONS:

-The air hockey minigame can be kinda jank, it's very easy to get into a un-winnable position

OVERALL:

Very great visual novel, clearly a lot of passion was behind this.

8/10

Bugs:

Nothing.

Strengths:

Great character design and animations.

Weaknesses:

Hitboxes are too big, there's no health bar and there's no objective.

Changes and Improvements:

Make the character smaller and add an objective as well as a Heads Up Display.

Bugs:

There is no "Game Over" lives keep going down beyond the negatives.

Strength:

Very good recreation of breakout.

Weaknesses:

Power-ups and Power-downs all look the same, they also seem to do random effects since getting two power-ups of the same colour can result in many different outcomes, make power-ups visually distinct.

Bugs:

Spamming the dash button causes the camera to lag behind, causing the character to go off screen.

Strengths:

Great gameplay mechanics such as dashing and wall jumping which has the potential to lead into some very creative level design.

Weakness:

Obstacles such as enemies are needed.