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Just streamed this live and damn you Barbara for making me cry on stream.  LOL.  Naw, good writing and it was a joy to read.  My GF and I playing through together ending up with ending 5.  =)

Nice concept but this needs a LOT of work man...

Loved your VN and I knew that it would take me longer than your 2 hour estimated playing time as I read these visual novels out loud when I livestream them.  I went over all four endings and gave my final thoughts as well.  (Spoiler Alerts)   I highly recommend playing this great VN yourself!

Great first VN to the developer Andy Church!

You can find my livestream done on Twitch re-uploaded to my Youtube channel in it's nearly 5 hour long entirety HERE:

Curious what you get with this game?  To be honest, I was pretty impressed with what they've done so far with this.. even though I'd like to see a lot more content added.

Watch my first impressions video featuring a full game played in this video:

Put up a gameplay video and tell me how we play a multiplayer game when NOBODY is gonna be playing this.. and I'll probably buy it.  ;-)  

Good job allowing you to take damage, but I tried this game again and now the damage stops at like 10% of my health bar filled and i'm invincible after that and take no more damage, so I never die.  So the same thing...   God mode.  Zzzzz.   

Hehe, I WANT TO DIE darn it!  ;-)  

I like the graphics and gameplay but two things...

1) You cannot die!  Ugh, nothing makes a game more boring than having absolutely ZERO challenge.  Zzzzz.  Please fix this ASAP!

2) Only ONE map, only two mobs to kill that I've seen with a 3 different power-up attacks.  It needs more.. Hopefully more content is planned and since it's early in development this is very understandable.  The God mode never dying or taking damage however needs fixed ASAP as I stated in point #1

Love both your games dude!  I even made a video featuring both of your little games!  I hope it helps you sell a few copies!  Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing what you make next!  :-)

No way am I giving you $6 for this without a game play video as the file size looks extremely suspect (only 6 mb for a game like this)  

I love it!  This is an awesome little game, great work especially considering it was done in just a few days for a game jam!

I made a video highlighting this little gem right here!

Interesting short novel with a very thought provoking point that is pretty deep for such a short story.  Also have some very wise words about life, out life here on earth as we know it.  I love it!

Watch my livestream of this right HERE:

Super cute novel, well worth the read!

Check out my livestream and play of two of the possible endings here:

Awesome little visual novel, took me about 2 hours to read aloud to my viewers on a livestream but that was with a lot of talk and interactions with my viewers!  I'm guessing most people will be able to finish this reading it to themselves in 30 min to an hour.  Well worth the time and certainly great for being "free"!

While the grammar and wording wasn't perfect, it delivered a great and super cute story that made me both laugh and made me think some pretty deep thoughts!  

I loved it.  I give this one a 8 out of 10.

If you want to watch my experience of this one, feel free to watch my livestream of it right here:

Wow, thanks for the comment Lee. Now I'm maybe curious enough to try it again and maybe try to be a little more ummm "dumb" I guess and be more romantic towards what seems to be a heartless and emotionless robot lol.

Don't get me wrong, i think I had a lot of fun with this VN, but I think the ending in particular was just ehhh unsatisfying, at least with the route I took. I have a feeling that you are right and that if I had gotten a different ending, it would probably have led to a less unsatisfied climax on my part and i likely would have given it much higher score then basic 5 out of 10. Let's put it this way, the first hour or two of my reading I'd probably put at about an 8, then it felt like it kinda dragged on and on hour number 2 to 3.5 or so, then the ending just didn't feel worth it all and took down what probably started off as an 8 initially (or perhaps even higher if it had a REALLY good ending)

Anyhow great job, please don't feel discouraged at my initial score because for a free visual novel, it is really good and also really well written. If you have any other VN's you'd like me to look at (even if they cost money), please let me know! I'd love to read more from you, and perhaps will try this one again in the future right here on my channel!

I had a lot of fun with this visual novel and I think it was great for being free.  While I didn't think as highly of it as I think I would have had I gotten a better ending, I still had fun with it on a livestream on my youtube channel...

Feel free to watch my first and only experience with this VN here: