The game looks very interesting, I always hate playing short versions, but I'll have to give this one a shot!
Also, "MrPinkCookie". Any relation to "DrPinkCake"? :P
I've played a ton of VNs, but this one has them all beat by a loooong shot. The story is intriguing, I have fun theories about the MC's past, and everyone feels so alive and separate. Not to mention, the grammar and spelling is amazing (something hard to find in a lot of VNs). I can't tell you how many times I've just been reading through it all and started laughing my ass off at the funny parts. Definitely a great game, you're doing an amazing job. Very excited for the next version!