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Torulf spoiler alert:

After doing all three endings, I can see how a red-flag Tordork is and fascinated by how he can subtly control both Arvo and Lake without trying much.

It's a bit sad to see how he always chases to that "highest" point in every aspect of his life (jobs, places, emotions,...), always talks about traveling to places to feel better than everyone else, and he will run away when things get hard, serious or just bored.

These things also affect Arvo and Lake, like they feel they aren't good enough for him. Playing as Arvo just feel like a teenage boy in the community finally being loved by someone, especially someone older but not worked out.  (I relate sm, but I'm glad that I'm over that phase now, lol).

Long story short, if I really think about it, Tordork is maybe about 50% of a bad person (lol), but actions have been made, so he's still a jerk anyways.

I hoped Arvo and Lake team up to start a revenge arc against Tordork. And I think the best outcome after D5 is just him being guilty and apologizing, but let's wait and see.

One thing that remains inside my head after Ch17 is Canto is a DILF 💀

SPOILER LARS EP2




Just playing Lars Ep2 (current L-D9) and now I feel like the Lars route is all fake now 😔And the thing abt Gil too 😭 And the main screen + song after playing it 😭 devastated

*BIG BIG SPOILER*














From the title "Broken Harbours", and after playing the game, I think Devon and Rune are like the right person wrong time kind of situation, which leads to "more than friends, but not lover". Even though they spend time with each other and even do "the thing", their loneliness is still there, or I think at least it is for Rune.

After the shower, Rune decides to go home, even though Devon suggests staying with him for the night. The story does not explain about Rune much in the end so idk.

For Devon, looks like he is finding some peace with his past, and he gonna accept of what will happen between him and Rune, good or bad because it's just another page of his life.

"No ship can moor at broken harbours", this describes what happens to the both of them rn, they are not ready for a LTR yet.

Also, a daffodil means hope, but giving someone a single daffodil also means misfortune. (idk if it means anything but I'm just putting it out there)

One question is, after this story, do they actually do "the thing" more than once or is it just a one time? 🤔 (before the DC ofc)

Gran D2 is just what I need for the long waiting 😭😭 my heart has been fulfilled 😭😭😭😭

IMMEDIATELY NO 💀 the new icon makes Walter look like an unserious douchebag imo,  he is supposed to look innocent and naive (if I'm correct) and the other is something... The art style def not fit with this game at all. Hoping there will be options to change it back or I will need some time to adjust to this "new" Walter.

And about the story's progress issue, ig they try to make the story as well-rounded and details as possible (also this is a multiple-choice VN), so it def takes a longer time to write, which is okay because I prefer that than linear story and I can still live at least 30+ yrs so I think I'm fine with that. 💀

Really glad that this VN is back on track and getting all the attention it deserves *proud parent noises*. The extras are really spicy. Keep up the good work.

#BaldGran😔

maybe he is next? but don't get high hope he will look good though 🥴

I'm sorry 💀

Yeah, I also believe Gil and Walter didn't do that too, but if they do...😬, that's just wrong imo and this is still an unfinished VN so who knows what the writers will do next 🙂. That's why I have to prepare myself for every situation that could happen for the next update.

ngl but I half blame Edgar for this, he has a FAMILY already but still acts like he is single, he even jokes abt ''what if his wife agrees to this'' and I like wtf? And Gil was not innocent either, but he kept it professional at the start and somehow failed at the end LOL. If Gil has an affair with Edgar and now he tries to have a relationship with Edgar's SON, aka Walter, that's the NEXT LEVEL of disgusting (ABSOLUTELY JAILLL). And look like this VN, 2/8 dads become a wh*re now. 🙂

Reading comments makes me feel stupid cuz I didn't know any small details in the story 😭 even though I read almost all of the routes

spoiler ig?

I think it's time for the MC to grow up in Strandbard, skip a month or two for him to be more "mature".  I like how someone finally talks some sense into him now

Yeah, DD vibes def add ✨spice✨ to the VN and I will try to stick one path more, but seeing how one choice can change some parts in the story is so cool

You should do Mark's back story cuz you will know what's happening in the story (after you finish Mark's route ofc)

First time I finish all the routes and it's so good (took me months though lol), this game is so well-made, the story is easy to follow and enough for you to play more, sometimes have that Doki Doki vibes and you can kinda "talk" to the narrator (really enjoy those) 

So far, I like Lars (the little things he does and said are subtle but so cute) and Tora

This game has so many choices that make me overwhelm sometimes (not a bad thing ofc) cuz I somehow got used to linear VNs lol 

I should have know when he talk like that, but I'm not that surprised tbh. And that mean, we will be on a new chapter, meet new ppl , new scenes and a new partner 😏 (hoping for a strong tiger 🙏). Sorry Ranok but we have to separate for while

I mean everything could happen; you just don't see it irl yet 🤔

To me, I actually enjoy the tennis match (when it has an indicator of what is going on) cuz it gives meaning to the name game "Tennis Ace", it's like a break from all the drama you have been through and it shows that how good Yuu is, not just by words. But when it does not have an indicator, I just fast read till the end cuz idk what happen.

I notice that the journey to the route select is kinda long (no complaint abt it), but it could mean the story will be longer?

Yuu has a backstory in other routes? (Like there is a part abt his past?) Cuz in Sho route, I don't see much of it. Other VNs I read are still in progress so I can judge abt it (some did mention lil bit, other is still expanding) and it is usually put somewhere at the end of the story, weird 🤔

he have a delay

Totally agree!
Same, more spoilers lol


















lmao, sr but to me, that sounds like Yuu just like a goal for Sho to achieve, when he achieves it he moves on to the next one. And wow, the drama in Jun route is smth, def try that when I have a chance.

I agree with you, doing the same to Yuu doesn't make things better, someone has to break the circle. Even though Sho said that he can't "read" what Yuu thinks anymore (like tf?? you now have a chance and you not even trying)

ngl, there is still a list long of how wrong Shoichi is, but I'm not going to talk abt that cuz ✨everybody makes mistakes✨ and the story is still in progress

It's emotionally drained to read but ig that means the writer is on the right path, right?

*Spoiler*

Ikr! Now I think of it, what really make me frustrated (only play Shoichi rn) 

is how hard to make them to open and explain more. 

He act likes Yuu is the stranger (I think bc Yuu did that to everyone for 3yrs and now they do the same to him??) even though they are childhood friend and even a couple 🙃

Only when Yuu pushed him to his limits, then he open up more 😃

(I feels so wrong and guilty when choose the choice cuz I would never be like that irl and how they react back is crazy, but I want to know what's going on. And that's when I stop playing)

Def love the game but handle these ppl are so emotional draning BUT again I still want to try the other two route 😔

I know what you mean 💀 but ig ppl could get affect by it cuz I get annoyed after read Shoichi route

Spoiler Shoichi (need to vent a little bit, don't read it if u don't want to):

The world is not gonna collapsed bc you disobey to your father and reconnect with your mom and sister👏👏 I hear there is a path where you can visit her but rn I feel too annoyed to explore more

Things would have been better if he decided to go with his mom👏👏

But ig we need smth to make the story longer, right ?🤔

I will if the game is worth enough, I ain't got no time to waste instead of doing real-life works. One route took me at least half a day

I think he got it from his dad, but ya I don't really like him that much

mkay, I will give it a try if I have time

Am I the only who don't like Jun from the start, he have that cute and innocent masks but inside he is not like that. Because I met some ppl like that irl and its not end well. I hear his route is good and I want to try it, but still...

What happens with this VN? I miss Gran so much :<

Tora is the last one. If anything happens to him again I will 🔪💣 this place and myself

Right on time for Lunar New Year :>> blessed

I think this guide could help u
 https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/0/d/1opecc1Wkh4iUxIYTlF0c5NtbbmmQ_30fIH2b5JXbqUQ/htmlview?fbclid=IwAR1MozbAEZGpCIyC2kIdDLITah9icBCD4JwsmbTSFb4hYqD8tqeTuXhFlaw#

I think he is the 7th or 8th dateable character in the game (Ig he could move in with the MC?)

Right!! Tora is the best boy

I 100% love the humour of this VN xD. But the main plot is easy to predict rn, ngl. (Spoiler: Whenever they go to the park, it's gonna have some fighting scenes or abt the new character). Hoping I was wrong though

I have suspicious abt Jake too, he has a bad vibe when I first saw him.

🥳🥳gonna play it this weekend

me too, but just a little bit of spice would be nice like, in the bad ending, they switch the twin, one of them could 💀, etc

Yeah, I mean if they add 1-2 bad endings, it would be cool

It's not a bug, but it would be cool if they add some horror scenes like in Doki Literature though 😗

me after read build5:  👁👄👁