I'm not past the prison storage area yet so I don't know if it happens more than just the intro, but I think that the inner monologue text at the beginning should hover over Rook while he's walking. I feel like it takes your eyes off all the hard work put into the scenery since you have to look over to read the text while the scene is being revealed instead of the text feeling like a part of it.  I don't know if it's different on a 16:9 ratio, but that's where it's placed on my ultra wide.