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Grammar errors Sticky

A topic by roadkillcandy created Feb 07, 2021 Views: 149 Replies: 1
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If you find a grammar error please Fallow the "glitch" protocol and send them in. 

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Example of Bug/Grammar report

FIRST ACT (town on fire)
- Girl says meny instead of many also why has a space before it
- girl says suddlen instead of suddenly
- T in time is caped
- Apple Mountain needs a caped M in mountain
- Not is capped
- We didn't even belive ( the W in we should not be capped)
- They Have been Reborn (Have and Reborn should not be capped)

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Seccond Act (Red village part and camps south)
---if you go to the two camps on the far right and the middle right and the one at the bottom below the 4 it spawns yo uin a diffrent location and you walk away from the mercs
--- you can walk ontop of the lake beside the camps

- I should head south ( find is capped anbd should not be)
- Went south (Teants is capped) - Guy With Glasses says Vote Mars (Vote is capped)
- Guy with glasses says god of War ( Should be God of War)
- Blue Hair Girl says It's Because ( Because is capped and should not be)
- Cowboy hat red says Hay Look instead of Hey look!
- Red hat says site instead of sit
- Girl then says Please, you must help my town north of here (add a comma here) the Volcano (cap volcano and add comma) it awoke
- After help ass a period
- We are mercvenary might wanna change to we are mercenarys
- The Lord Lives ( lives is capped and shouldent be)

- we need help needs to be moved up a line
- red hat says nice young Lady (should decap Lady but thats questionable)
- add period
- Please has a capped L
- you get paid (add and) we get (fastey is spelt wrong) (add comma) but we must hurry to the (Mayor needs caps) for his (change ok to approval if you want)

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Seccound Act (east to towns)
- South ish should be south'ish
- We needs a cap
- we are his people(add comma)we pay user taxes(period) He (cap he)should be willing to pay, not (many spelt wrong) people farm now (add a) days
- if you say no and take off right Hector's lines will still appear even if he is not present
- Ummm dosent have to be capped but concider it
- So needs to be capped
- And needs to be capped
- Lives is capped aswell as a Lot and they shouldent be
- I needs to be capped in the thought
- Well needs to be capped
- add perriod after you scout out
- and needs caps
- after are add a comma and after got it add a period
- add period after side

Third act (scounting)
--- THE HOLE DOWN SOUTH you can cut threw and the tree on the left and go threw
--- if you co back to the camps the start sequence starts up again if you say no and continue on
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