I wanted it to give off a broody, gloomy vibe to it, any thoughts?
thanks for the feedback, I see what you mean, that smile thing on the beak is just a seam, but maybe I could make the slope less steep. Once again, thank you for the feedback!
You're welcome! I see... the seam was a bit misleading. Looking forward to the new version, I like the character so far, I'm interested what will happen to him/her/them. Will the character be part of a game/ visual novel? :)
I really don't know yet, I have a story, a finished character, a setting ect. ect. But I don't know what medium I want to go with, maybe I'll make a small side game for em if I ever learn to code :V
Sounds great! Maybe you don't have to code, you could ask someone else? Or you start with an engine, that can be easily used by beginners? Or you make a zine/ comic/ visual novel... you could try out different mediums for your story. I'm sure you'll find something to bring your characters to life!
Thanks man, I'll try checking them out, I got construct 3 and I might learn to use that in the future!