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Some criticism and a gold star

A topic by AverageJoe112 created Aug 25, 2021 Views: 1,024 Replies: 5
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The game overall has great potential and is on the verge of being  a lot of fun with replayability.

The animations and art looks great. The pricing of the items is balanced to the amount of time it takes to get it. However the experience of getting the money is dead boring and I really don't think there's a reason to let that be the case. The slot machines is the way to go if you want to make any decent amount of money quickly since if you just click quickly you will win on average about 50% of the time. But that also means a lot of time completely wasted just clicking one button. Scrap that as well as the jack black game you've implemented and make something that's actually fun. Remember that it doesn't have to be anything super complicated to be fun, just use your creativity. Bonus points if you manage to make it sexy. If for whatever reason you don't feel like doing that, just remove it and increase the money you get from stream sessions by x100. There's literally no motivation for wasting peoples time here.

I'm impressed by the amount of things you're able to do in the game. Good job on that! I would thoroughly enjoy a slapping and spanking option. Perhaps some more facial expressions. Also either hair pulling or petting while in any position.

I felt like she was a bit unresponsive to the kissing as well as the eating out. There were some nice eye-movements and commentary in there, but it needed more of that. Like maybe her moving her arms and generally just being a bit more animated. Petting her was my favourite part of the game.

Question, what does the condition of the bought parts do? It didnt seem to look different (cat ears used/normal), perhaps explain what it affects when buying it.

There's not a ton of work left for this to be a great game, keep up the good work!

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PS- The resolution is kinda fuckie. It defaults to 1920 on my 1440x900 monitor and then no of the buttons are clickable (mac).

PPS- If I search for "My Dystopian Robot Girlfriend" on this site your game doesnt even pop up, consider removing "!Ω Factorial Omega:"

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And balancing this game is a very hard task. Any changes that are made have to be tested etc. And there are many interconnected systems. With each update I think It's slowly getting more and more balanced though. Making things fun is definitely an important part that we have to work on.

And facial expressions are pretty hard to get right because of all the different states bot can be in. For example at first she doesn't react at all, she will react differently depending on how much she likes you or how horny she is. Every state like this has to be treated and tested individually. So it's a lot of work considering all the things you can do.

The parts quality so far increases viewership of your streams. Later on we plan to add some scaring and stuff like this to show that they are damaged.

The game was made for 16x9 resolutions sadly early in development I didn't consider other resolutions, so GUI would probably do weird things. it's best if you keep it windowed if you are using non 16x9 screen.

You have it well balanced, just replace what I said needed to be replaced with something fun (which I understand isnt easy) and keep the pacing the same. I wouldnt feel this way if I enjoyed the money earning with some ecchi stuff.

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Do you need some inspiration? In that case, how about some black market stuff? Sell services like lending out your bot and it comes back a bit damaged or something in a sexy way. Scratches and stuff like you said. Perhaps some grafitti that you can clean by buying something cheap. People love maintaining stuff, that's why tamagotchi blew up. And personality traits might be gained, which might be more difficult to implement but that'd be hella cool.

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I feel like quite a lot of people wouldn't like the idea of pimping out your robo-gf. Maybe have it negatively affect sanity as well, if it'd be done? Depending on how attached your character is to her.

I, for one, am not a fan of NTR and would skip this option were it available.