Hey! I liked very much your game and decided to reformat it as an A5 document, reworked the presentation and changed the rules (trying to keep the same structure and spirit). I hope to not have been too rough with the work and hope you like it!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1EfNFo6axbhD9XTE2x4fkltMCWZH1FLl0/view?usp=shari...
This version is untested, so i might be unaware of a better balancing, Aether economy or structural limits.