I'm just going to make this topic since there isn't really a topic where such posts make sense... 

Inb4IDidSomethingPointless/Unwanted.

Anyway this demo was more entertaining than I thought it'd be.  I originally thought the MC was a little too ...bitchy for a lack of a better word, but they have some small charm to them. I do feel like you guys are going to  have a somewhat hard time making this character not seem scummy though.

So it just occurred to me that Mr. Boyfriend can become a hit man. I'm not sure how you guys are going to play this out, but on the surface it seems like it may be a bit too dark and gritty. The same could be said for drug dealer I guess, but that one isn't quite as bad compared to the former.