Just started getting into the game. Its turning out to be quite good.
My biggest gripe, so far, is the English is just good enough, at best; there are quite a few issues with wording.
Though, if you are interested, and if there's a way, I could improve the text for you, without sacrificing content or changing the length.
I am fluent in English (its the only language I know, too.) And have a Diploma in a few English-related subjects. If you are interested, don't hesitate to hit me up. I think It'd be fun.
And just so you know, don't take this post as a reflection of my English skills. I am typing free and quick, and am not trying to be correct here.