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Looking for feedback on my visual novel page.

A topic by miaqc created Oct 31, 2021 Views: 171 Replies: 2
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I had put 4 Alice MAG on itch.io yesterday. The page content is directly based on the one on Steam since a release there is coming. 

I’m looking for feedback since I don’t know if I can improve it even more. 

Thank you.

4 Alice Magical Autistic Girls by Mia Blais-Côté (itch.io)

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look´s good to me.

It has an eye catching look, and Trailer, Screenshots and this Steam page look.


I personally like it.

the only thing i would meaby remove is the banner, but that is my personal opinion.

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Thanks for your feedback. I could replace the banner with the game's logo.