The boob (& pec) windows, that is. I'm not complaining, but I have to ask why uniforms would have them. Is there maybe some fun lore reason?
I'm gripped by the premise, and the squids are shaping up to be a much more interesting alien race than most scifi I've read lately. The background art creates a believable space, even in its current sketchy style. You've clearly got a grasp on the underused Ren'Py features like the timing of text to interrupt and facial transitions. I'm especially excited to see how the choices will impact the story. If your attention to detail so far is anything to go by, the future of this project looks bright. It feels like you've put a lot of thought behind this project and building the world up; I'm excited to see where else we get to go!
How do you manage to stop yourself from making every little choice have a big impact? How do you prioritize that?
P.S. There's a spelling mistake in early chapter 3 where diary was misspelled dairy. The exact text is "The panel covered a small cavity filled with obsolete fuses that I could safely remove to make room for the dairy."
P.P.S. It's always good to see media from a fellow South African!