I'm looking for feedback on a short interactive story inspired by Disco Elysium, I'll randomly pick from the first 5 posts that offer feedback and gift that person a Steam or Itch game of their choosing that's $20 or less. Playtime is approximately ~40min.
The story: A famous painter finds themselves paralyzed from head to toe, unable to communicate with the outside world they see their relationship in a new light.
I'm looking for feedback on the story and presentation. The more detailed and honest feedback the better. I'd love to hear what's working and what's not. The planned final release will be free and will include music, backgrounds, and some light sound effects. Thanks!
Recommended background music for your playthrough.
Edit: Updated the download link since the last one stopped working after someone claimed it. Still getting used to how Itch.io private links work.
