This is the thread providing feedback, pointing out editing mistakes, stylistic inconsistencies, and the like.  I'm ready to hear your thoughts so I can make Fever Pitch Caltrop Edition the best it can be!

A note for the Alpha: It is not neatly laid out yet, some ideas spill over from page to page in ways I know are awkward, and some page breaks leave large gaps. This has not been fixed because the process of doing so would make later content edits and adjustments more complicated to do, so don't worry about that as a stylistic error, it is known and going to be rectified later on.