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Writing humor and certain parts need work

A topic by PotatoMasher created May 02, 2022 Views: 573 Replies: 1
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The whole Nun side-quest was longwinded and unfunny making it tedious to read, once completed you weren't really rewarded either. Speaking of longwinded that ghost story the MC tells rambled on and was painful to get through; for something so inconsequential I don't know why the writer(s) bothered. Lastly I think the game could do without the racist text especially from the chatters as it's pretty cringe and would be banned in chatrooms anyway. 

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¿What racist texts? o.0