Your own quote:
"The game isn't over if you are captured and become a slave or prisoner! Survive the cruelty and assault as you regain your strength and make your attempt to escape! Lona's suffering can only end if she dies or if you force her to give up..."
I remembering playing this back in 0.60 or earlier and really enjoyed the game because even if I got captured, I could struggle my way to freedom. It was very hard and I died a few times and took 1-2 hours(maybe too long IMO), but at least there was hope, and it was fun.
I just recently played 0.8.2 and I was captured by the fishkind, they raped lona one round and she was dead. I sort of remember this same thing happening in version 0.70 too. I think this really needs to be rebalanced. If Lona is going to die after one round of sex, you may as well just give me a game over screen. I really hope this gets fixed because I think H-games where you Game Over easily are bad/old design.
And I really hope you consider this seriously and not just say "it's supposed to be hard". I totally understand it's supposed to be hard. But right now it's not hard, it's impossible.