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Tiny suggestion?

A topic by charybdis created Dec 10, 2022 Views: 804
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I don't know if this is the place to do it, but I just wanted to give the developer team a tiny suggestion with regards to the wording in Chapter 6 in the one-on-one LI scenes. This is not meant to be criticism at all and if it's not helpful, forget I said anything!

As a dancer myself, the wording that the PC uses when describing their love for ballet is a little awkward. The term ballerina refers to the principal female dancers or the very best female dancers in the company. Given that, I think substituting "dancers" for the word "ballerinas" in the scenes would feel a little more realistic (although it's essentially a sci-fi romance so honestly, realism? who is she?)

The other thing is someone who's danced for many years and is en pointe would likely be learning "variations" instead of just "dances", they're essentially the solos that principal dancers and soloists perform in the ballets (The Sugar Plum Fairy's solo in the Nutcracker is the most famous example I can think of).

Also, I know this is really tiny and doesn't really matter, it's just a really small thing that could miniscul-ely improve the game! I really love y'alls work and hope this doesn't come across as offensive.