It´s the first game trailer we´ve made and i need help

is it good ?

or what can we do better?

Trailer:

I think It’s a pretty good trailer. Better than mine. Maybe one thing I would change on 0:21.. the text “but it is not an easy way” I would change to: “but it will not be easy” or: “but the way will not be easy” That sounds more natural to me.