Hi Femdom,
I've really enjoyed the game and the hard work you've put in to the game!! Always excited to play new versions when you release them!
I was thinking of some ideas to add to the game or potentially improve some current aspects (which I write this fully knowing that you have potentially already thought/heard of these and want to implement or have already begun to implement them);
I find the Lust and Willpower system to be a little to much in the background and doesn't effect the game to much, although I feel like they could really change the feeling of the game in a fantastic way.
At the beginning of the game the MC is able to have sex with Zoe so long as it's night time and nothing else sexually has happened. But as time and Zoe's domination level progresses, things like licking Zoe, getting out of chastity, not having to do something, etc.. mostly not having to do specific things all costs willpower. I think it would be amazing to expand on that, in giving the MC more options of stuff they could request happen no matter where in the house;
- Having regular sex while having chastity on (so being unlocked to have sex and then promptly being relocked)
- Pegging
- Using the face dildo
- Requesting to be put back into chastity (if it has been removed by MC's request or Zoe doing it)
- Using the strap-on on Zoe
- Getting to eat his own cum (even if in chastity)
- etc...
Though the MC can request these with a willpower cost, a few things should be able to effect the level of willpower cost. Zoe's domination level can be a factor, the higher the level, the higher the base cost for the request. The MC's lust level could be a hidden factor, the cost will increase the higher the MC's lust is (Basically he is feeling to needy and/or horny and he needs to hide it from Zoe, otherwise she will deny him his request). But the MC doesn't know how much extra WP the request is requiring. I.e. it might say the cost of licking Zoe is 20 WP, but with the lust level, it might actually be 33 WP. So the MC who has only 20 WP can still ask Zoe with 20 WP but since he doesn't have the required amount for the true cost (33 WP), he gets rejected and only gets to keep half of the original 20 WP points (she doesn't like being constantly asked or if you look too pathetic she'll laugh and say no). This is of course alongside the fact that if the MC has a high lust level it's harder to gain willpower, the the MC has to be very mindful that the value of WP might be very high as it's hard to gain and weigh it against the risk of losing it depending on how badly he wants something.
So in the end if the MC is in chastity and hasn't cum in a long time maybe they will have to use 100% of their willpower to hide their horniness/neediness to get to lick or be pegged by Zoe.
Otherwise like it already is, what happens is completely up to Zoe, which it would also be fun if there where variations of what could happen when the MC asks for sex. I.e. when the MC asks Zoe for sex when she's on the couch she could either be one or multiple of the options in one sex session;
- Have you penetrate her with a strap-on,
- She peg the MC over the couch,
- Just have the MC lick her while she watches tv,
- Give Zoe a foot rub with the MC back to the TV (Maybe down the road even have the MC be a footstool).
- Etc..
Also I think as Zoe's domination level increases, she initiates things more often and at random times. Since Zoe has a high sex drive, she requires a lot of attention and if the MC is in Chastity it's going to make it harder to keep his lust level down the more dominate she becomes, as the MC won't be able to evade these events and will rarely be allowed to cum.
One such event could be, after the MC is in chastity and pegging has begun, when Zoe and the MC go out to the restaurant she could randomly order you to the bathroom, strip down to your panties and stockings, then peg you in the bathroom.
I think it would also be fun to be able to do chores around the house without needing Zoe to ask, maybe keep Zoe needing to ask at the beginning and it awards willpower but as she progresses into domination, it starts to penalize your willpower if she has to ask. Also maybe have some nights where the MC gets home first from work and it gives the MC a chance to prepare supper and clean the house, so once Zoe is home, she comes home to a meal, freshly clean house, and cutely dressed slave waiting for her.
But to make it more complex, maybe only allow three things to happen before Zoe comes home and the options are:
- Clean the house
- Make supper
- Get dressed into panties and stockings
- Jerk off to porn lowering the MC lust level (If the MC doesn't have chastity on); maybe have the option if the MC does have chastity on, he can cum via a solo prostate orgasm to help lower his lust level (this isn't as effective as jerking off though)
- (if there was a hygiene stat bar) the MC could have a shower as he might be too dirty/hairy that effects Zoe's mood* with the MC
- Etc...
*Maybe down the road giving Zoe a lust level and mood bar;
- Lust level could make it interesting as it would give the MC another weight to balance against their own lust. Being in chastity and keeping her lust level down makes her happier and more willing to do things you want but since she has a much higher sex drive it will be very hard to keep the MC's lust level down while trying to keep Zoe's lust level down. Also constantly asking for sexual things could lead to angering Zoe.
- Mood bar would indicate to the MC how Zoe is doing; If she is happy and very lustful she gets very kinky and more willing to do what the MC wants to do. If she is happy but not lustful, more willing to do what the MC wants but might make her angry as she may just want to relax. If she is angry and lustful, she will punish the MC, treat him very poorly, and mostly focusing on her orgasm/desires. If she's angry and not lustful, she will focus on punishment with no sexual play at all.
For items;
- Butt plugs, that prior to pegging, Zoe starts getting the MC to wear and as the pegging level progresses the size of plugs and strap-ons increases. On a higher pegging level (down the road of development), it could be a stat where if the MC isn't properly stretching then it angers Zoe (depending on Domination/Pegging levels) because you aren't ready for what she wants to do. So the MC needs to buy plugs that are going to get him ready for Zoe
- Dildo's to allow the MC to customize the look of the strap-on's
- Items that improve Zoe's mood towards the MC (I.e. Flowers, chocolates, concert tickets for her and her bff, a beautiful diamond jewelry, etc...) the items can be repeatable after a certain amount of time has past
- Impact toys as a means of punishments' if Zoe's anger and/or lust levels get too high, she starts to whip and flog the MC
- Bondage equipment, like bed straps, saint andrews cross, spanking bench, etc.. Maybe at higher domination levels, Zoe will only unlock the MC from chastity if he is in bondage to ensure he can't play with himself. Also maybe, if the MC buys these items to improve Zoe's mood, Zoe gets the MC to throw out his items around the house so they can put the cross or bench in their place.
Sorry for the super long message, I am just super excited about the game and where it goes, that I wanted to share some thoughts. I really love your game and think you're doing an amazing job!
Regards,
An enthusiastic fan