I'm just a player of a lot of games like these, so I thought I'd share my 2c in the hopes that I'll help the game become even better
1) The dialog box needs to be made a bit darker and more opaque. The white writing on the light pink is a bit eye-strain-inducing
2) Too much fragmented dialogue! My hand is tired from pressing the space bar. At the very least, I _strongly_ recommend combining multiple dialogues into one box. You definitely don't need a single dialog for every sentence or thought. A lot of it could be cleaned up and thinned out, but that's a more refined question... just getting it into multi-line dialogues would drastically improve the playability and flow.
3) Maybe it's just the route I followed, but there is a _lot_ of focus on BBC/Cock size and humiliation fetishes. I know these are popular kinks in the 'sissy' subculture and community, but they are not the only ones, and not universal. I suggest making it more obvious in the game description pages what kinks are focused on in the game.