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I spent 3 months to create Demo of my game. Now I need Feedback

A topic by Games2See created Oct 25, 2023 Views: 185 Replies: 3

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Games2See1 year ago (1 edit)

I'm looking for someone who could give me some feedback about my game.

Game is VN with RPG elements.

I need any feedback. Really just any.

Demo is for ~20 min.

https://games2see.itch.io/memory-detective-akira

Kind Regards, G2S

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Evolutionary Games1 year ago(+1)

It looks great. I'd recommend you upload a video showing the gameplay.

Your introduction is a sales pitch. But I don't have enough info to entice me to download it. What am I actually going to do in the game? (That's where a video will come in handy.)

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Games2See1 year ago

I love your answer, because you throws me in problem. If you didn't like the screens there is a change that you won't like the game. The game it self is a Visual Novel with some RPG mechanics where you use your memory to fight with guys.

What kind of gamer are you?

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Evolutionary Games1 year ago

I play non-violent casual games - like the ones I make.

I did like the screenshots, but they didn't tell me much about the actual game play. Your graphics are good, but RPG games and visual novels are not my thing. (I read sci-fi and fantasy short stories, but not detective stories.)

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