Pros:

Lovely, lovely visual style.

Great atmosphere/sound/music.

Ok:

Basic puzzles

Cons:

Controls could use improvement, e.g.:

Double click to run.

Click or right click to close dialogue box: I wanted to make a dialogue box disappear, so I was clicking on it, or out of it. As a result, the girl was walking away, towards the position I had clicked, which was a bit frustrating, especially due to the lack of aforementioned double click to make her run back to the spot she was before.

All in all, with minor tweaks and a good story with decent puzzles, I believe you have what it takes to make a really good point & click adventure.

Bravo!