Just wanted to say that I really liked that first chapter. Some typos and all, but the story start well, the characters are hot, and all. I just wonder, will there be romance or just plain "carnal acts" ? x) And if there's romance, will it be locked or we can do the 4 at the same time if the two other characters are the same size as Gahel and Elred, wouldn't mind getting them all on me x)) ? I'm wondering too if there'll be battles, and the possibility to loose to monsters/demons in a suggestive manner ? Maybe too much question already :p
Good luck for continuing !