i like the game. it will probably be in my fav 5 if you dont mess up in later chapters
for story, its basically good and im glad you added a reminder for what happened from start in sayuri's chapter but finish the story in book 3 otherwise game would be too long and we might forget the beginning or get confused . Also loved the humour and emotions between 19-24th chapters it was good balanced
for graphics, game looks very good and animations are crazy also i would be happy if you do 3 scenes for each chapter instead 2. In 20-24 chapters there are so many skipped scenes