Just gave this a quick look over & wanted to point out some things. First thing that's odd is under "Creating Your Character." That section ends with with "Write the modifier next to your" with no obvious continuation of the sentence (maybe I'm missing it). And in the "Damage & Weapons" section 'Relic' should be Relics unless relic is referring to weapons. Lastly, near the end of the "Leveling Up" section - "They also gain 1 XP for surviving a perilous situation or dying close to death." Dying close to death .... surviving close to death? 
This looks like a neat little game as well as your Swords of the Mist.

Hi! I have a question about armor. So If I buy the Tower SHield and Breast Plate for my character, then my agility would be reduced by -4 but I would have 6 points of armor, making my character nearly unkillable. Is my interpretation similar to your intention or Am I missing something? I used the d20 version for some of my solo sessions but the same question kept coming up so I kinda changed it to AC. Other than this I really liked your compact rules!