I'd say this is a huge Upgrade on the First Game, Quite Short but entertaining nonetheless. And You changed it from a sandbox game to VN which is very wise By the way (At least for me) no more Grinding just straight to the story.
I'd Give this 4.8/5 Cuz it's still the Game we love but it's kinda move way too fast for me at least No typos or anything for now.
The Remaining .2: where Eleanor At?