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Feedback on a visual novel about goblin discrimination

A topic by ukigumosama created 62 days ago Views: 82
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https://ukigumosama.itch.io/goblin-relations

Hello,

I recently made a visual novel featuring a cute goblin girl and a story revolving around a priest protagonist who with her help wants to change how other humans view goblins.

I'm looking for feedback about several things:

- First, the plot. I tried to combine several wild ideas into a cohesive plot. I'd like someone to tell me if I succeeded at that.

- Secondly, should I change the game from NSFW to SFW? For a week I tried to figure out why my game was marked as NSFW in the first place. From what I found out it's probably because I tagged the game with "monster girls" which seems to be an adult tag. I've used it because the heroine is a goblin girl. However, I'm not sure if I should change it to SFW. The game itself has some fanservice and a bit of adult jokes, but I'd like to know other's opinions if it's on the NSFW level. It also seems that most views of my game are from NSFW tag, so it might be beneficial for me to just leave it there, because of that.

- Lastly, I'd appreciate any advice on what kind of audience should I try to market the game to and how to approach it. I've already posted it around different social media, but I think that I should do something that would showcase the game's strongest points, for that, I'd like to see what others would consider its strongest points.