I'm sorry to do this, but this wasn't enjoyable for me.  There's hardly any artwork, and it's not even a 'game'.  There's no choices or anything, you just keep clicking to get to the end (which you can do in a few minutes).  What visuals are there are nice, but I was expecting choices.  Yes I know, it's a VN, but I know tons of VNs that have choices to them.