Hey team, thanks for posting this for people to play! As I was going through, I noticed a few things. 
First, as you go through the level when the player interacts with the npcs their messages come on and off the screen so fast sometimes you have to restart to get the whole message. Maybe having an interact with a button to acknowledge what they said could be good, or a longer delay depending on which one is better. Second, I got stuck a few times throughout at times you'll see that in my video. Having a revert to last checkpoint might be helpful so that way the player doesn't have to restart from the main menu if something goes wrong. In the menus, sometimes when you open it you had to click back into it for the mouse to appear again a minor fix that shouldn't take long to get worked out. 
Lastly, I want to say I really did look forward to playing this prior to, and the game was fun but has minor improvements that need to be made to see the full potential. I do really like the goal you're aiming for keep at it!

Here is my playtest. I'll try again later to see if I can get further. Let me know if there are any more updates to this game, please and thank you. 

https://youtu.be/Fanf0CHs4MY