Really cool story, I would have loved any sound at all tho, like when the artefact chants or some sounds to indicate who is talking. Manual dialog almost seems like a must, I got so lost trying to keep up. I also would have loved some more options like maybe being able to touch the artefact or something. 

loved the art work that this submission has. 

Personally I was struggling to keep up with the information being given out to us. 

Though the idea felt really fluid. 

Thank you 

Cool story. It made me want to visit the movie it was inspired by! It would have been good to have the audio included but I did as suggested and played the youtube video in teh background whilst playing and it did really help with the atmosphere. Control over the narrative moving (skip, next, back) etc would have been useful and more moments of decision branches but oevrall it was a good creepy story. 

Being a slow reader it was kind of hard to keep track as the automatic slides was pretty fast, a manual next would of been much more preferred but it might of been just me, overall the story was decent and the theme's were well implemented.