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A jam submission

Two Spirits 0.01View game page

Submitted by GTA5AW — 4 days, 18 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Black and White#2533.3335.000
Originality#2972.0003.000
Theme#2991.8332.750
Gameplay#3011.6672.500
Overall#3181.8062.708
Art#3291.3332.000
Music#3360.6671.000

Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

okay okay not bad. i can kinda see the theme here (characters loop when hitting the wall, right?). i should've read the game page directions haha controls were different than i was used to. it'd be nice if the character looped all the way back to the edge rather than in the middle. honestly not much else to say for a simple game that collins didn't already mention. 

for your first game jam you did great. your files ran, your game doesn't shatter somewhere, there's not a harsh difficulty curve ( although it does get too easy over time ). keep up the game devving! someone i binged after my first (completed) game jam entry was a ytber called Design Docs that helped me understand the game design part of game dev. opened my eyes, maybe it will be of use to you if you wanna game jam again someday.

Developer(+1)

Thanks for you're opinion on my project :) i hope my next entries will get better and better. And yeah, i should add more customizibility to difficulty level, and probably make it more polished. Still, real thank's for you're feedback 

Submitted(+1)

It's really neat to see an entry made by a young programmer! They should be very pleased with themselves for submitting. As I usually do, I like to provide feedback and suggestions for future games or work on the same project.

  • As a player, having each character move in the same direction felt counter-intuitive. I think it would feel more natural if the left player can only move left and the right player only move right.
  • In the future, think about adding sound and music. There's free assets here on itch and sites like opengameart. Not only will this keep the player's interest, but also provide the player feedback when something happens. If I get hit, I want some kind of feedback that lets me instinctively know I got hit and make me feel a sense of danger.
  • I would also include a quit game button that closes the program, especially when its a fullscreen game.

Overall, they should be excited that they were able to submit to a game jam, and be encouraged to keep learning and making new things!

Developer

Realy thanks to you for that feedback :)  game is not ideal after all, since i don't have that much experience and it was my first ever game jam entry. But game jam is such of fun. I will try my best in next B&W jam

Submitted(+1)

No worries! You can learn a lot from your first game jam (and others too!) Feedback has always helped me improve!