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A jam submission

The Plot Hole : Little RedView game page

A retelling of the classical: Little red riding hood, where the player shapes the narrative of the story.
Submitted by LaCrearthur (@LaCreArthur), Handy Corpse, El Fideo Rubio ( Héctor ) (@El_fideo_rubio), validbit — 52 minutes, 2 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Innovation#34.4054.405
Audio#74.0004.000
Overall#114.0064.006
Theme#134.1654.165
Game Design#623.7973.797
Graphics#634.0134.013
Fun#743.6583.658

Ranked from 79 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+1)

Had a play of your game in this video here - at 58:40 -, where I give my thoughts while I play. Hopefully it's helpful feedback.

If you have time I'd greatly appreciate it if you could give my game a go to, happy jamming

Developer

Already did, awesome game dude ! thank for the coverage !

Submitted

Very nice game! A little improvement and the game would be great.I enjoyed playing it. All the best and Good luck! Do check out our game we need the feedback! - https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-3/rate/574293

(1 edit) (+1)

Super design!!! 5 stars!! The voice acting is really good and the script is hilarious! Well done!!!
I know you rated our game already as I read your comment, but you didn't sound too happy with it..... please consider giving it another go, we all suffered some bugs and issues ;) Thank you! 
https://cyberlab-studios.itch.io/packed-out

Submitted

Really cool game! It was very enjoyable and so innovative. It has some problems with the black hole cause it doesn't always eat words. It was quite annoying, but I liked the whole game! Relly nice! :D

Submitted(+2)

Definitely one of the most original interpretations of the theme I've seen yet, and as a narrative oriented experience I enjoyed it quite a lot, and I appreciate the replayability value.
I liked the general humour and meta jokes in particular, the writing was very good all throughout, the audio comportment the game relies on is impeccable and the person voicing the narrator did a very good job, and together with the writing really helped making the personality of the narrating character come across.
I've found the art direction quite pleasant looking and consistent, and the set dressing for the level to be quite well done.

If I'd have to point out flaws in this product:
- I'll probably criticise how the main mechanic feels "weird" as I'd find myself holding left click while moving my mouse over a word several times before it would finally be absorbed,
- and I had a couple of audio glitches: once the narrator kept repeating a line about flowers in loop until I reached the next location, and when I restarted the game from the end screen the narrator kept playing his end game audio while also playing the game start audio at the same time.

Submitted

Nice.Rate my game also.

Submitted(+1)

The game mechanic is very interesting! The audiovisuals are great for a jam game, and the storytelling is interesting.

It took me a long while to get the black hole working in the opening, and I made some progress, but couldn't remove the words "appealing" or "pine".

I like the black hole effect and how it distorts the area around it, but it's very buggy and even when it works, it takes way too long for it to suck the words.

Some more sound effects would be nice, and I wish the narrator made a comment when I went to the left in the beginning.

Everything else seems top-notch from what little I could play.

Developer(+2)

Thanks for your comment, we're glad you liked it.
We've made a version with fixes and updates here that's been created after submission period if you want to try :)

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