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A jam submission

The Plot Hole : Little RedView game page

A retelling of the classical: Little red riding hood, where the player shapes the narrative of the story.
Submitted by LaCrearthur (@LaCreArthur), Handy Corpse, El Fideo Rubio ( Héctor ) (@El_fideo_rubio), validbit — 52 minutes, 2 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Innovation#34.4054.405
Audio#74.0004.000
Overall#114.0064.006
Theme#134.1654.165
Game Design#623.7973.797
Graphics#634.0134.013
Fun#743.6583.658

Ranked from 79 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+2)

5 stars across the board!

Developer

Thank you !

Submitted(+3)

This is my 15th game jam... and this is the best thing I have ever seen come out of a jam! Bloody awesome! Really funny, made me want to play all the way till the end. This could be 30 hours long and I would probably not even realise the entire day pass while I played!

Developer

You are so nice thank you very much !

Submitted(+2)

Wow, this is awesome, so original.

Even have nice graphics, sounds, story...

This is great! Real nice game!

Developer

Thanks a lot

Submitted(+2)

Great concept, Awesome story,Incredible graphics and music.One of the bests game in the jam.

Developer

thanks for your really nice comment!

Submitted(+2)

Oh, nice twist. I'm really liking the stanley parable-like self conscious humor. I want more of this.

Developer

thanks for the nice comment! Did you found the two endings ? :p

Submitted(+2)

I really liked the concept!! Most probably the only entry with a voice over. Great Job!!

Developer

thanks for the nice comment!

Submitted(+2)

That was a...unique...experience. Wonderful idea und really good voice for Storys. Great work!

Developer

thanks for the nice comment!

Submitted(+2)

Love your sense of humor.

also quite a unique game.

nice one :D

Developer

thanks for the nice comment!

Submitted(+2)

Very fun and funny, thank you for this gem and the killer voice acting. The clicks were a bit unresponsive at times though.

Developer

thanks for the feedback, there was snappier in the editor but we will fix this !

Submitted

All good, I know how much of a bitch the webGL can be

Submitted(+2)

Love the game.. Visual and Narrative are  great,. Met some bugs had to restart to continue.. But overall an amazing game. Great job.

Developer

Thanks for the feedback, sorry for the bugs, we updated our game's page with a disclaimer to work around them !

Submitted(+2)

Hmm is there one ending because for some reason I couldn't let this wolf eat me

Developer

there are two endings, if you are stuck it is maybe that you have to move forward a little bit, and for the endings there the one when you let the wolf eat you and the one when you delete the wolf :p

Submitted(+1)

We did a similar take on the theme with plot holes, very cool. Had a lot of trouble getting the black hole to work, for some reason it wouldn't suck up the word until I restarted the game. Really cool take on the theme though, excellent work!

Developer(+1)

Thanks for the feedback, we updated our game's page with a disclaimer to work around the bug !

Submitted(+2)

A little bit buggy, but graphic and game concept are awesome!

Developer

Yes it is, still a lot of little bugs to fix.  : ) 

Thanks for checking us out!!!

Developer

Thanks for the feedback, we updated our game's page with a disclaimer to work around the bug !

Developer(+1)

!!! When in the cottage, keep inching forward after each dialog choice to enable the next set of dialog!!! 

Submitted

Amazingly creative idea! Really great take on the theme, and looks very polished.

The narration is very good but sadly didn't seem to be completely in sync with the gameplay. I eventually got stuck when I entered the house where I couldn't suck up any more words, even after trying multiple times. Had some good fun up to that point. Nice job! 

Developer

Thank you for checking us out!! If anyone gets stuck in the house, keep moving forward after each deleted word to continue : )

Developer

Thanks for the comment, sorry it wasnt obvious you have to move a little bit to trigger the next words in the house

Developer

🛑 IF YOU HAVE ISSUE WITH THE DIALOGUE LOOPING, press "N" key to skip a dialogue !

🛑 IF A WORD IS NOT DELETED AFTER A WHILE, release and hold-click again on the word !

Submitted(+2)

"The story that ends with the wolf eating a little girl. One of my favorites..." I genuinely laughed at that part :D

Great unique concept and endless potential for further development. One of my most favorite submissions so far!

Developer

Thanks a lot

Submitted(+1)

Great idea and it was so funny!

It would be appreciated if you add an music!

Also there was a bug at the first page that the voice was repeating and saying the same thing.

I have played it once but I noticed you can change more than one word in a sentence,right?

And I found it hard to erase the words sometimes :(

It was a great and funny game after all XD

Good job!

Developer(+1)

Thanks for the feedback, we updated our game's page with a disclaimer to work around the bug !

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

The game looks so promising and unique. Sadly I find myself unable to progress past the first page from the book. What am I supposed to do with the black hole? It is not eating any of the words.

Developer

Hi Almogo, so after 2 or 3 lines of dialogues a black hole will appear, click on it to enable it, after that  another audio cue triggers, when this one finishes you can now access the main mechanic, which is hovering over words to change the story, if the word can be erased it will wiggle a bit.

Let me know if this helped you, or if you run into another obstacle.

Submitted

Oh! I had to wiggle it really hard but it worked. Thanks!

Developer

Thanks for the feedback and sorry for the bugs, we have updated our page with a disclaimer ! 

Happily we had a secret key to skip the audio during test that can be used if there's a bug

Submitted(+1)

That's what I call a unique idea!

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