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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| THE COIN - How well does it incorporate a coin thematically and mechanically? | #1 | 4.222 | 4.222 |
| Overall | #8 | 3.593 | 3.593 |
| THE STORY - How plausible, imaginative, and different is the story? | #10 | 3.444 | 3.444 |
| THE WRITER - How well-written and structured is the content? | #13 | 3.111 | 3.111 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I quite love how much it focuses on the coin and its mechanics, personally, really feels like this Spark is meant to go with a CoinSides and that the coin is the whole scenario, the circumstances around it are almost incidental!
I would suggest maybe making it clearer in the scene itself that the Retrieval Specialists are from the Observatory, as I didn't quite get this until I read over the whole document, and the players would probably react very differently to two randoms asking for the coin as opposed to people that hired them arriving for it.
It does make me wonder why they didn't just send the Specialists in the first place, but then, that's always how these things go in media!
LOL yep, they're super talented specialists who are ridiculously slow at finding things apparently! 🤣If only the super powerful team at the Observatory had specialists for finding things too 😅
I like that point, by the way, about making it more clear they're from the Observatory. Thanks for pointing that out! And thanks for your wonderful words as well :D
- ✨Beth
Awesome Adventure Spark. I've got a few minor comments as feedback. How can I get them to you? Feel free to email me at yokubosan@gmail.com - Cheers!
Done :D
- ✨Beth
Thanks so much for sending me the feedback! I got a lot of great use out of it :D
- ✨Beth
My pleasure!
You made it in time! :) Glad to see you joined!!!
Hiya! And thanks :D I didn't think I was going to but my work hours these days are super minimal and I had lots of extra time to spare 🥳
- ✨Beth
Hopefully this counts :D I saw where some of the other Adventure Sparks had their scenes as basically things the coin can do, and I ended up using so much space with the coin's abilities that I only had about 106 words left. 🤣 Plus the setups also work as scenes, as each initial scene can also be something that happens along the way (aside from the first one).
I'm proud of what I made regardless, and I understand if it's disqualified for this reason, I just wanted to point it out ahead of time. :D
- ✨Beth