Hi Monsters & Co., I agree, the strings after the intro come a bit too hard, I now realize I should have had them fade in more softly. As for the ending, the finale is always the most time consuming part for me and since I had almost no more time after the weekend I decided to fade it out and focus on improving the rest of the composition as a whole.

I also definitely agree with Bison Warlock, I need to improve (more like learn) mixing, if any other composer has tips about it, please write a comment!

I've listened to this about ten times since you uploaded it. Really well done, in every aspect of the score. The melody was carried by more than one instrument, which gave it great variety, and it flowed so nicely. I loved the intro. I learned a lot just by listening to this, which I plan to incorporate into my future compositions. The only things I think you could work on were the transition from the intro (it was a bit jarring) and the end (I felt like it needed more of a resolution rather than a fade out, but that's just my opinion).

Sporadic!

this gave me so many happy and good feelings. the melodies, harmonies, and pacing were wonderful. the mixing could use a little bit more work, but otherwise it was great. thank you for submitting this! you did a fantastic job.

I like it so much. Good job.