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A jam submission

Red-Brick Factory Skate SceneView project page

Submitted by doodlefunction — 2 days, 10 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Research + Development#143.6673.667
Creative Development#163.3333.333
Overall#223.0003.000
Final Presentation#242.6672.667
Project Documentation#313.3333.333
Technical / Workflow#342.0002.000

Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

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  • Hi Sienna, Looking over the work and your notes, and your protfolio - you've clearly got experience making great assets. Making that shift from asset to environment artist isn't that big of a leap, but it does require thinking about things a bit more differently and we'll talk about that as part of my feedback Overall, it looks like you have great grasps on scale, lighting and set dressing. The one part that sticks out to me is that you chose to texture a large chunk of the brick wall as a unique asset - I'd strongly recommend you approach large scale architectural pieces like you did with the flooring : as a tiling texture. From there you can look into making a layered material to blend in the stucco or plaster that you've painted in the texture currently. You've started approaching assets a bit like this - I'd like to see you push it further. I'd also like you to revisit the brick texture while you're doing this, as right now it seems a little cartoony (intentional or not - it's very busy and is distracting) and if I have one piece of advice here, it to focus on that read so it's not stealing attention away from the over all scene.

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Comments

Submitted

Looks really cool!!

Developer(+1)

Thank you very much :) it was fun to make! 

Submitted

very nice 

Developer

Thank you! 

Developer

Since it is only view-able on the project page, here's the youtube link!