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Red-Brick Factory Skate Scene's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Research + Development | #14 | 3.667 | 3.667 |
Creative Development | #16 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
Overall | #22 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Final Presentation | #24 | 2.667 | 2.667 |
Project Documentation | #31 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
Technical / Workflow | #34 | 2.000 | 2.000 |
Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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- Hi Sienna, Looking over the work and your notes, and your protfolio - you've clearly got experience making great assets. Making that shift from asset to environment artist isn't that big of a leap, but it does require thinking about things a bit more differently and we'll talk about that as part of my feedback Overall, it looks like you have great grasps on scale, lighting and set dressing. The one part that sticks out to me is that you chose to texture a large chunk of the brick wall as a unique asset - I'd strongly recommend you approach large scale architectural pieces like you did with the flooring : as a tiling texture. From there you can look into making a layered material to blend in the stucco or plaster that you've painted in the texture currently. You've started approaching assets a bit like this - I'd like to see you push it further. I'd also like you to revisit the brick texture while you're doing this, as right now it seems a little cartoony (intentional or not - it's very busy and is distracting) and if I have one piece of advice here, it to focus on that read so it's not stealing attention away from the over all scene.
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Looks really cool!!
Thank you very much :) it was fun to make!
very nice
Thank you!
Since it is only view-able on the project page, here's the youtube link!