More subtle indeed. ^_^
I liked the writing and musical choice.
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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Originality | #2 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
Fun | #3 | 3.250 | 3.250 |
Creative Use Of The Theme | #3 | 3.250 | 3.250 |
Overall | #3 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
A short and sweet VN. I enjoyed reading it.
The story felt a little disconnected. It's not clear where the story is going. The characters are simple and nameless. It doesn't quite meet the jam's theme.
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PortalRoomsThank you, indeed it was disconnected I felt like I needed more time to add more concepts to it, as several parts of the story make reference to actual people and theories. I planned on adding the concept of Autopoiesis or “self creation” as a driving point in the story, as it is related to “self reference” but couldn’t find myself the time hopefully next jam I can use more development to the particular topic.
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