Interesting. I didnt get to read the end message. It left too fast.  =[

But nice graphics. I think itd be neat to see review comments pop up from both employees and the customers. If you ever wanted to have a win/lose feature, you could have decisions pop up. kinda like that game "Sort the court."

I know you made it for a quick laugh but you could flip it into an addicting game as well if you added things like bills that have to be paid, random industry changes that affect what you should do, make money gain over time. Have events and press releases in the game that help you make decisions. You could do these and still have the corporate greed message you want to share as well.

Really liked the graphics and the ambiance sounds.