I didn't see how the mechanics relate to the story. Loved the decision making, as well as the artistic concept. The music is stunning - good job. This needs to continue and become a philosophical game.

The main character's animation is 'lacking' - it can definitely improve. Also pay attention to the game focus: If it is about the story, then make the game play (matching the balls) easier. The game is not to succeed or fail in doing that, but to take the 'right' decision, and there you can play with the story line and have many many story lines where the player needs to decide whether or not to make a mistake or not. Then it would be very interesting to me - but that's just an opinion :)

Great job!

The one critique which seems to be common here is that the actual game mechanics don't support the narrative as well as they should. I would suggest adding more variety of "mini-games" each tailored to fit the narrative of the moment in narrative that it goes with. The art style is quite nice as well as the sound. the narration is not bad but i expect it to get better with practice :) (voice-acting is not easy so kudos). I loved that i could choose to walk "backwards" (Left) which breaks the norm of right being forward. so going with the norm is like clinging to the past and going left is trying something new.

أحسنتم، لعبة ممتازة تمتاز باستعمال كافة عناصر التفاعل مع اللعبة بشكل ذكي جداً..نجحتم بجعل نصفي مخي الأيمن والأيسر يتقاتلان، أرجو الاستمرار بتطويرها

alright. am a big fan of the narrative, but i am not so sure about the mini games itself. it doesn't push the narrative, and it feels very out of place.

good job overall

not bad aim for an artistic story telling style, But the game mechanic did not make sense to the story and was generally not too fun, I found myself spamming the space button till I won,

the intro made me hold my breath, the game is really (really) beautiful and mysterious. The only thing i have comment on is the mini game.

شيء جميل ! جميل جدًا !!

الموسيقى دخلتني جو، المؤثرات الصوتية ممتازة

اسلوب طرح القصة غريب وجميل

تجربة غريبة وممتعة بشكل عام، واتوقع كل واحد بيفهم الاحداث بطريقة مختلفة عن الآخر

لكن الـmini-game

ماهي بالمستوى المطلوب..

استحي اقول جربوا لعبتي بعد هالتجربة الجميلة :(