I think you should give a bit more infos about your game on the game page. What is the story, what are the controls (though they are pretty obvious), post some screenshots etc. .

I got stuck at the second door after meeting the first monster.

I don't see the difference to your first attempt to upload it for the jam (https://itch.io/jam/gdb-juice-jam-ii/rate/1897084?before=3#post-7313324).

To me it looks like a beginning of a promising game.