Thank you! Love to hear you enjoyed it! I'm sure I could find some better paragraph breaks in there but the intention with the longer blocks was to simulate the tunneled-in thought loops or rabbit holes or just racing/unstoppable thoughts. It's hard for me to read these passages, too. I also think a different font would have been better for readability but I got too close to the game jam deadline.
So I rather took the time to wrap it up with the start and end screen and the achievements. Quite proud that I made that work, otherwise people could miss so many things and not even know there's more to the game. And some parts are quite easily missable even on multiple playthroughs.
Had a good laugh and unlocked half the achievements. Text was well written and funny a good amount of the time. My wife was also chuckling as I played. With visuals I think I would try to 100% it. Keep up the great work!
Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing the jokes and hoped people would connect with it. Many things sound funnier in one's own head than spoken out loud or on the page =) Glad you liked it!
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Great game! Really funny and I got almost all the achievements! You can tell you really put your heart into it!
The writing was really good and enjoyed the experience. Sometimes wished for paragraph breaks before the adhd took me ;) So much content in this gem.
Thank you! Love to hear you enjoyed it! I'm sure I could find some better paragraph breaks in there but the intention with the longer blocks was to simulate the tunneled-in thought loops or rabbit holes or just racing/unstoppable thoughts. It's hard for me to read these passages, too. I also think a different font would have been better for readability but I got too close to the game jam deadline.
So I rather took the time to wrap it up with the start and end screen and the achievements. Quite proud that I made that work, otherwise people could miss so many things and not even know there's more to the game. And some parts are quite easily missable even on multiple playthroughs.
Thanks again for playing =)
Had a good laugh and unlocked half the achievements. Text was well written and funny a good amount of the time. My wife was also chuckling as I played. With visuals I think I would try to 100% it. Keep up the great work!
Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing the jokes and hoped people would connect with it. Many things sound funnier in one's own head than spoken out loud or on the page =) Glad you liked it!