Thank you! Love to hear you enjoyed it! I'm sure I could find some better paragraph breaks in there but the intention with the longer blocks was to simulate the tunneled-in thought loops or rabbit holes or just racing/unstoppable thoughts. It's hard for me to read these passages, too. I also think a different font would have been better for readability but I got too close to the game jam deadline.
So I rather took the time to wrap it up with the start and end screen and the achievements. Quite proud that I made that work, otherwise people could miss so many things and not even know there's more to the game. And some parts are quite easily missable even on multiple playthroughs.
Thanks again for playing =)