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A jam submission

Visitors and GoonsView project page

A Tunnel Goons adventure with Alvarengu
Submitted by BaalCreations — 1 day, 13 hours before the deadline

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Vote for your favorite#523.0463.182

Ranked from 11 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+2)

I actually really like the premise of this game - sending a modern team of folks into a scary darkness full of horrors known to them as the hole is thematic as hell.

I think this could use some editing and layout updates (bolding headers, removing lead indentation in paragraphs, some small organizational stuff) but it sounds like you lost your initial work and had to recreate this from memory!

I really like your inclusion of notes on how to approach starting a horror game and talking through what they do/don't want from it.  You mention folks having explicit roles but I think defining some of those archetypes (and maybe giving them a special ability?) would be really useful.

Developer(+2)

Thanks for the words! I'm really excited to continue this project - I decided to wait until the Jam ended to keep uploading new versions of the game. I'm still a little bummed about losing the original, but the show must go on! Again, thanks for the feedback and I hope that you like / try the future versions.