This looks like a great start. I like the world you have built, but there still isn't much to tell the player what to do. I would consider renaming the quest log to more of a journal as it is more of a past events as oppose to what you are planning to do.
Play game
Welcome To Welkin's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Can't Wait For The DLC / Sequel | #12 | 2.889 | 2.889 |
Art / Aesthetic | #19 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Overall | #21 | 2.356 | 2.356 |
Music & Sound | #22 | 2.556 | 2.556 |
Gameplay / Fun Factor | #25 | 2.222 | 2.222 |
Ready to Release for Money! | #26 | 1.111 | 1.111 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
Judge feedback is anonymous.
- I really enjoyed the storytelling with the journal and the diary - it felt very immersive because I was interacting with the world to learn the plot. The moment where you walk into the church and see the light over the podium feels very momentous, so great job with the environmental storytelling! It does not feel like the game is finished yet; I could not find anything new to interact with after the diary in the morning. However, this is a promising start to what I can see being a very thrilling game, so I would love to see you continue working on it! :)
Concept Jam Submission Link
https://mrdryeratnight.itch.io/welcome-to-welkin-concept
Prototype Jam Submission Link
https://mrdryeratnight.itch.io/welcome-to-welkin-prototype
Production Jam Submission Link
https://mrdryeratnight.itch.io/welcome-to-welkin-prod
Leave a comment
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.