• Overall: The game is looking pretty nice, and the map layouts are cool.
• Fun: It was a lot of fun to explore and talk to people.
• Visuals (Graphics): The pixel art is a nice start!  Maybe different areas could have slightly different color pallets to make them feel more different.
• User Interface: The dialog system is great.  However, I think the character portraits should be on the other side? It looks odd that they are looking off screen.  Usually the player portrait is on the left and looking right, and the NPC portrait is on the right looking left~
• Audio: Nice simple sounds so far, a bit loud in my headphones though.  Some ambient wind and medieval city sounds would make it more immersive 

Awesome start and keep it up! Please check out my metroidvania when you have time :D

The art looks pretty good! I would try to differentiate the building styles a bit more if they are supposed to be really different, but they all seem to be from the same place for now so that could be intentional. I liked the main characters portrait art. It is all a bit 'generic fantasy' but that also could come from not having much of the story yet. I found the destroyed house in the capitol and I liked that! Made me curious about it. Overall pretty good looking, but I would recommend trying to find some kind of style or flavor to add to help differentiate it from other fantasy games.